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The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Table

The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. EaGM
The table depicts the percentum of participation female in senior management postision in Eldan, Bamforth, Finsbury ltd, from 1975 to 2015. Overall, percentum of women participation in senior management was inceasing over the year. women took less participation in Bamforth Ltd, and finsbury ltd as compared to the elden ltd. It is clear from the table, by 1985, women had less interest in senior management job in eldan, bamforth than the finsbury ltd. A minor difference was seen in the percentage of women who participated in three companies for senior magament in 1985. moreover, to regards of senior management, women had maximum percentage in bamfarth in 2000, by contstact eldan and finsbury had only 25%and 20% in 1990. participation of women as not much in bamforth ltd and finsbury ltd as elden ltd.
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management
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postision
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Eldan
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Bamforth
,
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Finsbury
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women
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management
was
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inceasing
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women
took less
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participation
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Bamforth
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finsbury
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elden
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clear
from the table, by 1985,
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women
had less interest in
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senior
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management
job in
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eldan
,
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bamforth
than the
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finsbury
ltd. A minor difference was
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seen
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women
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companies
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senior
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magament
in 1985.
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moreover
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senior
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management
,
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women
had maximum percentage in
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bamfarth
in 2000, by
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eldan
and
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finsbury
had
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only
25%and 20% in 1990.
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participation
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women
as not much in
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bamforth
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015.

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133 words
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