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The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

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The diagram illustrates the life cycle and anatomy of a lady bird. Overall, the life cycle of a lady bird consists of four stages. It starts life as an egg and goes through two other stages before finally becoming an adult lady bird. With regard to its anatomy, a adult lady bug has seven main body parts. The life cycle of a lady bird starts with an adult lady bird laying eggs on leaves. The egg stage is for 2-5 days and the egg develops into a larva and remains in the larval stage for 21 days. From the larva, the pupa is formed and this stage lasts seven days. This pupa develops and matures into an adult lady bird. As for the anatomy, a lady bird has 7 main body parts. The head consists of 2 antennas, eyes and a protonum. The trunk of an adult lady bird is covered with red elytra. The wings and the abdomen lie under the red elytra. This adult lady bug has six legs with three on each side.
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cycle of a
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consists of four
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adult
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bug has seven main body parts.

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laying eggs on
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for 21 days. From the larva, the pupa
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. As for the anatomy, a
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IELTS academic The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.

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176 words
5.0
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