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The graph below shows the dif erences in wheat exports over three dif erent areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the dif erences in wheat exports over three dif erent areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Kkw9
Overall, the three regions experienced different trends in the time period. While the wheat export in Canada and European countries rose with some fluctuations, the export in Australia fell over time. As the graph shows, Australia's wheat export figure started at 15 million tons in 1985 followed by a small increase to around 16 million tons in 1986. Then, it declined steadily until it fell to just over 10 million tons in 1990. Regarding Canada's exports, in 1985 they shipped approximately 19 million tons of wheat. This figure fell to about 17 million in 1986, but then their exports experienced considerable growth to 25 million tons in 1988. Afterward, the figure plunged to below 15 million in 1989, but then subsequently rose to just under 20 million in 1990. By contrast, the wheat exports from the European Community experienced an increase in the six year period. In 1985, nearly 16 million tons were exported, but this number fell to about 14 million in 1986. Then, the exports increased to exactly 15 million tons in 1987 and 1988 before witnessing steady growth to 19 million and 21 million tons in 1989 and 1990, respectively.
Overall
, the three regions experienced
different
trends in the time period.

While the wheat
export
in Canada and European countries rose with
some


fluctuations, the
export
in Australia
fell
over time.

As the graph
shows
, Australia's wheat
export
figure
started
at 15
million
tons

in 1985 followed by a
small
increase to around 16
million
tons in 1986. Then,

it declined
steadily
until it
fell
to
just
over 10
million
tons in 1990. Regarding

Canada's
exports
, in 1985 they shipped approximately 19
million
tons of

wheat. This figure
fell
to about 17
million
in 1986,
but
then their exports

experienced considerable growth to 25
million
tons in 1988. Afterward, the

figure plunged to below 15
million
in 1989,
but
then
subsequently
rose to
just


under 20
million
in 1990.

By contrast, the wheat
exports
from the European Community experienced an

increase in the
six year
period. In 1985,
nearly
16
million
tons
were exported
,

but
this number
fell
to about 14
million
in 1986. Then, the
exports
increased

to exactly 15
million
tons in 1987 and 1988
before
witnessing steady growth

to 19
million
and 21
million
tons in 1989 and 1990,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the dif erences in wheat exports over three dif erent areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
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