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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the samc two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum During the year before refurbishment: During the year after refurbishment: 74,000 92.000 Results of surveys of visitor satisfaction Year before refurbishment 1. Very satisfied Satisfied Dissatisfied Very dissatisfied R No response 15 Year after refurbishment . Very satisfied E Satisfied Dissatisfied Very dissatisfied 67 No response

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the samc two periods. YoVj
The table illustrates the total number of visitors to Ashdown museum during the pre refurbished period and post refurbished period. Likewise, the pie chart show the comparisons, of visitors satisfaction, between the same two periods. Overall, it was conspicuous that travellers of the Ashdown museum were very satisfied during the year after refurbishment. Moving to a more detailed analysis, if we observe carefully, during the period prior to refurbishment, that dissatisfaction of people was more than one third, precisely 40% of total visitors. Subsequently, the proportion of very dissatisfied was one in ten. The percentage of satisfied tourist was a little less than one third. In contrast, post refurbishment had 92, 000 visitors. During this period of the year, the part of ‘very satisfied’ was expanded up to 35%, which was 15% before refurbishment. Interestingly it was also clearly visible that the part of dissatisfaction reduced up to 15%, less than one fifth. It was also observed that, the proportion of ‘no responses remained under the same roof.
The table illustrates the total number of
visitors
to
Ashdown
museum during the
pre
refurbished
period
and post refurbished
period
.
Likewise
, the pie chart
show
the comparisons, of
visitors
satisfaction, between the same two periods.

Overall
, it was conspicuous that
travellers
of the
Ashdown
museum were
very
satisfied during the year after refurbishment.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, if we observe
carefully
, during the
period
prior to refurbishment, that dissatisfaction of
people
was more than one third,
precisely
40% of total
visitors
.
Subsequently
, the proportion of
very
dissatisfied was one in ten. The percentage of satisfied tourist was a
little
less than one third.
In contrast
, post refurbishment had 92, 000
visitors
. During this
period
of the year, the part of ‘
very
satisfied’
was expanded
up to 35%, which was 15%
before
refurbishment.
Interestingly
it was
also
clearly
visible that the part of dissatisfaction
reduced
up to 15%, less than one fifth. It was
also
observed that, the proportion of ‘no responses remained under the same roof.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the samc two periods.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
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