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The line graph shows an estimate of how many people were online worldwide from 1995 to 2002 and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of users in 6 different parts of the world in 2002.

The line graph shows an estimate of how many people were online worldwide from 1995 to 2002 and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of users in 6 different parts of the world in 2002. 5GrV
The data illustrates the number of online users around the world between 1995 and 2002. The chart on the other hand, demonstrates the ratio of the people using the Internet from 6 different countries arranged respectively - USA and Canada, Asia Pacific, Africa, Europe and South America in 2002. Overall, the prediction for the population of internet users have constantly increased in number over the past 7 years from 1995 to 2002. In response to this, the countries USA and Canada have garnered the largest percentage of internet users in 2002 with 53 percent. Followed by Europe with 24 percent and Asia Pacific accumulating 15 percent that year. In regard to the aggregated data for the online users from 1995 to 2002, there was a plammet increase between the year 1999 and 2000. There were also significant changes in 2000 as it the population went up in 2000. In general, the statistics gathered for the Internet users have increased overtime during the 7-year-period. To further elaborate on the previous record, the 3 countries with the most number of online users are USA and Canada with 53%, Europe with 24% and Asis/Pacific gaining 15%. The chart also shows the small number of internet users in countries sch as Africa, Middle East and South America having only 8% in total for the year 2002.
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USA and Canada, Asia Pacific, Africa, Europe and South America in 2002.

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over the past 7 years from 1995 to 2002. In response to this, the
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USA and Canada have garnered the largest percentage of internet
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users
in 2002 with 53 percent. Followed by Europe with 24 percent and Asia Pacific accumulating 15 percent that year.

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from 1995 to 2002, there was a
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increase between the year 1999 and 2000. There were
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significant
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in 2000 as it the population went up in 2000.
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, the statistics gathered for the Internet
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users
have increased overtime during the 7-year-period.

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further
elaborate on the previous record, the 3
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with the most
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of online
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are USA and Canada with 53%, Europe with 24% and
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8% in total for the year 2002.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows an estimate of how many people were online worldwide from 1995 to 2002 and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of users in 6 different parts of the world in 2002.

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