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The line graph depicts the US energy consumption by fuel from a report of 2008, from 1980 with the prediction till 2030. Overall, petrol and oil accounted for the highest consumption followed by coal and natural gas. Consumption of Nuclear, solar/wind, hydropower was same in the statring of the era but hydropower contributed the least. In 1980, petrol and oil comprised of 35 quadrillion units this figure few blips in year 1985 and 1995 but according to prediction petrol and oil will be accounting for 50 quadrillion units. Coal and natural gas had 20 and just over 15 (quadrillion units) respectively by the end the coal consumption will going to be double whereas natural gas saw consumption fluctuated and at the end cureve will become pleataue. Nuclear, solar/wind, hydropower accounted for same consumptions in 1980. Nuclear consumption saw sligt increase in by the end of 2050 just below 10 quadrillion. In contrast hydropower consumption will going to be the same and least among all the 6 fuels.

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