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The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money in charity by the age range for the year 1990 and 2010

The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money in charity by the age range for the year 1990 and 2010 Dll06
The bar chart depict about the proportion of British people contributing money for charity by different age group in year 1990 and 2010. In short, in year 1990 highest funding is given by middle age group and lowest by young group, whereas after two decades it reveal exactly opposite picture. In year 1990, 18-25 age group provided about 17%, while in year 2010 only 7% funding is done by similar age group. with age contribution is increased, so 26-35 age group has done 30% donation. Moreover, middle age group contributed highest among all age group in year 1990 and it is 42%, but after reaching older adulthood that proportion started declining and it stays in the range of 30%-35%. With in two decades this trend is changed. So, young adult has given about 24% and that proportion is raise by 10% for 36-50 age group. After that, this percentage start raising and reached its highest that is 40% by 51-65 age group. Than, that proportion decreased subsequently by 5% for 65 and more age group.
The bar chart depict about the
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1990 and 2010.

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1990 highest funding is
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by middle
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and lowest by young
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, whereas after two decades it
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exactly opposite picture.

In
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1990, 18-25
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provided about 17%, while in
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2010
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7% funding
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contribution
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26-35
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has done 30% donation.
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, middle
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contributed highest among all
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in
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1990 and it is 42%,
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declining and it stays in the range of 30%-35%.

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about 24% and that
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is raise by 10% for 36-50
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. After that, this percentage
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raising and reached its highest
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decreased
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money in charity by the age range for the year 1990 and 2010

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