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The given charts gives information on the proportion of their production budget the middle family üasted on cafe meals dishes in various years the provided graph illustrates the quantity of dishes consumed in fast food cafes and sit doün restaurants.

The given charts gives information on the proportion of their production budget the middle family üasted on cafe meals dishes in various years the provided graph illustrates the quantity of dishes consumed in fast food cafes and sit doün restaurants. mkdN
Overal, the home cooking accounted for the maximum percentage of food budget, while the minimum proportion was observed in restaurant meals. Fast food made up the majority of the meals at the end of the period, whereas Sitdown restaurant meals included the least number of meals. In detail, home cooking stood at the 90% of food budget in the beginning of the period then it decreased and included 85% in 1980. This figure for restaurant meals became 65% for the next year, while this indicator plummeted, reaching at 50% at the end of the year. Sitdown Restaurant meals accounted for 20 in 1970 then this upward trend increased and reached 50. Fast food meals were also 20 in the beginning of period like sitdown restaurant meals. In 1980 this ratio rose and presented 30. Turning to another year, a considerable rising was experienced in fast food meals accounting for 50. At the end of the year rocketed and constituted 90.
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, the home cooking accounted for the maximum percentage of
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food
budget, while the minimum proportion
was observed
in
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restaurant
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meals
.
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Fast
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food
made up the majority of the
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meals
at the
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end
of the period, whereas
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Sitdown
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restaurant
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meals
included the least number of meals.

In detail, home cooking stood at the 90% of
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food
budget in the beginning of the period then it decreased and included 85% in 1980. This figure for
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restaurant
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meals
became 65% for the
next
year, while this indicator plummeted, reaching at 50% at the
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end
of the year.

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Sitdown
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Restaurant
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meals
accounted for 20 in 1970 then this upward trend increased and reached 50.
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Fast
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food
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meals
were
also
20 in the beginning of period like
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sitdown
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restaurant
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meals
. In 1980 this ratio rose and presented 30. Turning to another year, a considerable rising
was experienced
in
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fast
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food
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meals
accounting for 50. At the
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end
of the year rocketed and constituted 90.
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IELTS academic The given charts gives information on the proportion of their production budget the middle family üasted on cafe meals dishes in various years the provided graph illustrates the quantity of dishes consumed in fast food cafes and sit doün restaurants.

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