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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European City in 1960,1980and 2000.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European City in 1960, 1980and 2000. JGWE
The rendered pillar chat depicts the information about how the various modes of transportation used to make a regular Journeys in a single European city in 1960 to 2000 the data is calibrated into percentum. In 1960 bus was the vehicle which showed the greatest interest of European people which was observed to be around 37%. This was followed by the tubes which reported above 25%. whereas cars registered the least interest of European. The figure was recorded to be near by 7%. After 20 years, in 1980 the maximum preferred transport for community by people were train and bus, both stood at almost 30%. The second preferred vehicle was private vehicles, which was increased by nearly 17%. Tubes are less popular among people in this year. In 2000, the other hand, A Remarkable increase was shown by car users in this year. It witnessed at approximately 38%. The public transport such as tube and bus become less familiar in 2000. This was recorded approximately 25% and 5% respectively. From an overall analysis, it is vivid, in last year people show their greatest interest in private vehicles while public means of transport become demandable.
The rendered pillar chat depicts the information about how the various modes of transportation
used
to
make
a regular Journeys in a single European city in 1960 to 2000 the data
is calibrated
into
percentum
.

In 1960 bus was the
vehicle
which
showed
the greatest interest of European
people
which
was observed
to be around 37%. This
was followed
by the tubes which reported above 25%.
whereas
cars registered the least interest of European. The figure
was recorded
to be
near by
7%. After 20 years, in 1980 the maximum preferred transport for community by
people
were
train
and bus, both stood at almost 30%. The second preferred
vehicle
was private
vehicles
, which
was increased
by
nearly
17%. Tubes are less popular among
people
in this year.

In 2000, the other hand, A Remarkable increase
was shown
by car users in this year. It witnessed at approximately 38%. The public transport such as tube and bus become less familiar in 2000. This
was recorded
approximately 25% and 5%
respectively
.

From an
overall
analysis, it is vivid, in last year
people
show
their greatest interest in private
vehicles
while public means of transport become demandable.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European City in 1960, 1980and 2000.

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