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The table below shows the distribution of world population by difference regions in two years 2000 and 2050.

The table below shows the distribution of world population by difference regions in two years 2000 and 2050. 8GPam

The table illustrate the information about distribution of world population by difference in two years 2000 and 2050. At the onset, it is vived that, the highest population is increasing in Africa and Oceania have some position. Turning to the details of this tabular chart, the population of Africa in 2000 was 13 percentage and highest population in 2000 was in Asia which amounted to 60 percentage. While, the Europe has been 12 proportion out of 6 billions and 5 fractions population distributed in North America. Moreover, onemica had lowest distribution of individual in 2000 which was amounted to 1 proportion. Moving further, in 2050 highest population growth will be in Africa which will be recorded as 20 percentage and distribution of world population in Asia will be less than 2000 year which will be amounting to 59 proportion. Moreover, in North America and Europe will be less distribution of individual which will be recording as 4 fractions and 7 percentage respectively. While, ocemia will be same position.

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