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The table below shows the average income and divorce rates of different sized families living in England in 2004.

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The given table provides information about the percentage of divorce rates in the UK, including the number of children and the average family’s salary in 2004. Overall, it appears that in England, if a family had more than five children and were in the lowest income bracket, the divorce rate was higher than those who had one child per household and had a high-end family income. The lowest income earners in the UK in 2004 had the highest ratio of getting a divorce, while those who secured a high salary were considered to have a lesser rate of divorce. For example, families with 5+ children and with an income of $43, 000 had a far higher rate of divorce at 42% in total. Whereas the households who brought about $73, 000 with one child only recorded divorce at around 15%; contrasting, with families with $10, 000 lesser income than the highest income holders had 22% rate of ending marriages in England that is 7% more, even they had no children. Conversely, there was a mere 1% difference between households that earned $65, 000 and $66, 000, which resulted in divorce at 25% and 24%, respectively. In contrast, families with four children and a total family income of $57, 000 were recorded for just above one-third in 2004 for getting a divorce.

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