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The rendered process chart demonstrates the information regarding various steps which were used in manufacturing bricks for the purpose of establishing an industry

The rendered process chart demonstrates the information regarding various steps which were used in manufacturing bricks for the purpose of establishing an industry yDbng

The rendered process chart demonstrates the information regarding various steps which were used in manufacturing bricks for the purpose of establishing an industry Beginning with the first and foremost step where a digger was used to dig the clay and a metal sleeve grind the clay with the help of roller by adding water and sand. After that a wire cutter turned the moulded clay in the shape of bricks which were later in dried in oven at required temperature for 24-48 hours. Bricks were then cooled from moderate temperature (200°c-980°c) to high temperature (870°c-1300°c) for maximum 48 to 72 hours. At the end whole stock got packed in desired way. Finally bricks are ready to transport in the market. Overall, the whole process includes seven stages for the production of bricks and all are quite necessary, if any single step will be dismissed then it may cause trouble in the entire procedure.

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bricks
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Beginning with the first
 and foremost step where a digger was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to dig the clay and a metal sleeve grind the clay with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of roller by adding water and sand. After that a wire cutter turned the Possible spelling mistake found.moldedmounded
moulded
 clay in the shape of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
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in dried in
 oven at required temperature for 24-48 hours. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
Bricks
 were then cooled from moderate temperature (200°c-980°c) to high temperature (870°c-1300°c) for maximum 48 to 72 hours. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 whole stock This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 packed in desired way. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
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bricks
 are ready to transport in the market.

Overall
, the whole process includes seven stages for the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 and all are quite necessary, if any single step will be dismissed
 then it may cause trouble in the entire procedure. 