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The table below shows that the production of cacao beans in six countries between 1992 and 1998.

The table below shows that the production of cacao beans in six countries between 1992 and 1998. 8XoG

The table compares six territory which have produced cacao beans over the period 1992 and 1998. Beginning with 1992, we find out that South America is the leader in the production of cacao beans which is 143000 while it is just 29000 in Africa. On the other hand, others, Oceania, England and North and Central America are quite close to each other so, it is 40000 56000 46000 one by one. In 1994, there is a rise in England, Oceania, Africa and Asia in the production but, despite decreasing in South America, it is still the leader region in the contrast of North and Central America which has produced the least. During 1996, the growing has been increased sharply in South America, Asia, Africa and Oceania and in this point Asia grew the most of beans 234000, whilst there is not any variation in the turn of North and Central America. Finally looking at 1998, there is a sharp decreasing in the number of beans in Africa which has been declined from 119000 to 25000, unlike South Africa have raised this quantity until 389000 from 127000.

The table compares six territory which have produced cacao You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 over the period 1992 and 1998.

Beginning with 1992, we find out that South America is the leader in the production of cacao You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 which is 143000 while it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 29000 in Africa. On the other hand
, others, Oceania, England and North and Central America are quite close to each other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, it is 40000 56000 46000 one by one.

In 1994, there is a rise in England, Oceania, Africa and Asia in the production This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, despite decreasing in South America, it is still
 the leader region in the contrast of North and Central America which has produced the least. During 1996, the growing has been increased
sharply
 in South America, Asia, Africa and Oceania and in this point Asia grew the most of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 234000, whilst there is not any variation in the turn of North and Central America.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 looking at 1998, there is a sharp decreasing in the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 in Africa which has been declined
 from 119000 to 25000, unlike South Africa have raised this quantity until 389000 from 127000. 