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The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present. akWP

The given map illustrates the growth of a seaside village from 1995 to the present. Overall, the images display a small-scale community which is situated nearby the sea. The infrastructure includes a main road which leads to the seashore and another road which is parallel to the sea. Overwhelmingly, there are more household at present than there used to be with more houses were built and more apartments replacing the fish market. Also worth noting is the addition of a car park and an alternative road in the north. Another significant point is the replacement of farmland and forest park with a golf yard and a tennis yard. Shops also gave way to restaurants, which were opposite the apartments. However, the location of the cafe seemed unchanged whereas there was a removal of the fishing port in the seashore.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map illustrates the growth of a seaside village from 1995 to the present.

Overall
, the images display a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
-scale community which is situated
 nearby the sea. The infrastructure includes a main road which leads to the seashore and another road which is parallel to the sea.

Overwhelmingly
, there are more Possible agreement error. Did you mean "households"?households
household
 at present than there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be with more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
were built
 and more apartments replacing the fish market. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 worth noting is the addition of a car park and an alternative road in the north.

Another significant point is the replacement of farmland and forest park with a golf yard and a tennis yard. Shops also
 gave way to restaurants, which were opposite the apartments. However
, the location of the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 seemed unchanged whereas there was a removal of the fishing port in the seashore. 