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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. 7aArb
The bar chart shows information about changes in percentage of population in urban areas in the three different period. Overall, there is increasing in the total population in urban areas in distinct years. The highest population every year is in North America. Based on the bar chart the large population living in urban areas in 1950 was North America and the smallest population in the same year in urban areas was Africa that only 15%. In 2007 North America is consistent with the enormous population living in urban areas with 79%. However, the transformation sharply occur in Latin America, where 42% in 1950 to 76% in 2007. Meanwhile, in 20150 North America in prediction had 90% population in urban areas, followed by Latin America and Europe respectively 89% and 84%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

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