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The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. N2Bj
The table depicts the data about the population of elderly people in different three countries in the year of 1988 and 2000 and prediction of 2030. Focuing on the details, it can be noted that the highest percentage of aged people were living in Germany in the year of 1988, which reported for atleast 20. 50%. Besides this, in case of Canada and UK where popultion of elderly people accounted for 16. 32% and 14. 23% out of the total population. Followed by next 12 years, there is dramtic increament noted in all countries. In Germany and Canada where number escalated to 25. 32% and 20. 67% recpectively. But, when it comes to the UK in this pecentage of populataion aged 65 and above was slightly canged in this year. By 2030, in Germany and Canada percentage of aged people will soar significantly by around 6% and 5%. Interestigly, there may be sharp incline trend occur in the UK for the population of the aged people, in 2030 it shall reach to 20. 35. Overalll, it can be inferred that population of elderly people is anticipated to rise in all countries from 1988 to 2030.
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three countries in the year of 1988 and 2000 and prediction of 2030.

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aged
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were living in Germany in the year of 1988, which reported for
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popultion
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accounted for 16. 32% and 14. 23% out of the total
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12 years, there is
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dramtic
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noted in all countries. In Germany and Canada where number escalated to 25. 32% and 20. 67%
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populataion
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65 and above was
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By 2030, in Germany and Canada percentage of
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, in 2030 it shall reach to 20. 35.

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population
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is anticipated
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