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The table below highlights data on the number of the travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003

The table below highlights data on the number of the travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003 AMGn
The following table compares the statistics about quantity of the tourists using three British airports from 1998 to 2003. Overall, Gatwick airport was much more active than Heathrow and Stansted airports during 5 years. Stansted was the least popular for foreign visitors at that time. The number of the travellers at Heathrow airport was not as less as at Stansted. The least amount of tourists as 17. 3 visited by Stansted in 1998. There were much more increasing at three airports during 1999. In 2000, Heathrow became by far the most crowded airport (48. 2). 47. 3 millions of travellers preferred Gatwick airport in 2001. Therefore, it was the best result. Gatwick didn't give the leadership between 2002 and 2003. Stansted got the same numbers of the tourists during the last three years. Morever, at Heathrow there were not any large changes during the given years.
The following table compares the statistics about quantity of the tourists using three British
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airports
from 1998 to 2003.

Overall
, Gatwick
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airport
was much more active than Heathrow and
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Stansted
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airports
during 5 years.
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Stansted
was the least popular for foreign visitors at that time. The number of the
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travellers
at Heathrow
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airport
was not as
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less
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as
at
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Stansted
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The least amount of tourists as 17. 3 visited by
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Stansted
in 1998. There were much more increasing at three
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airports
during 1999. In 2000, Heathrow became by far the most crowded
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airport
(48. 2).

47.
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3 millions of
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travellers
preferred Gatwick
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airport
in 2001.
Therefore
, it was the best result. Gatwick didn't give the leadership between 2002 and 2003.
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Stansted
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got
the same numbers of the tourists during the last three years.
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Morever
, at Heathrow there were not any large
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years.
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IELTS academic The table below highlights data on the number of the travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003

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