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The table below shows data about the underground railway networks, which compares the six networks in six cities based on their age, length and the number of individuals that use them annually.

The table below shows data about the underground railway networks, which compares the six networks in six cities based on their age, length and the number of individuals that use them annually. OgG0j
The table below shows data about the underground railway networks, which compares the six networks in six cities based on their age, length and the number of individuals that use them annually. It can be clearly seen that the older the system is, the longer it is. Besides, the three latest open underground networks have fewer passengers than the old networks. Out of the six countries, London is the oldest system and also has the longest underground system. Despite the fact that the network in Paris is half the length of the London railway system, yet more people use the Paris one. Meanwhile, the Tokyo system has 155 kilometres of routes. However, the number of passengers using it is nearly equal to the total number of passengers using the London and Paris systems combined, with 1927 passengers a year. On the other hand, Washington DC has the longest railway network and serves the most people among the three newer systems. While the Kyoto and Los Angeles underground systems were opened in 1981 and 2001, respectively, and had a shorter route, with 45 kilometers in Kyoto and 50 kilometers in Los Angeles.
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networks
, which compares the six
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in six cities based on their age, length and the number of individuals that
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annually
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that the older the
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is, the longer it is.
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underground
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networks
have fewer
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passengers
than the
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Out of the six countries, London is the oldest
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system
and
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has the longest
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system
. Despite the fact that the
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in Paris is half the length of the London railway
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,
yet
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people
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the Paris one. Meanwhile, the Tokyo
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has 155
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kilometres
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using it is
nearly
equal to the total number of
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passengers
using the London and Paris
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systems
combined, with 1927
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a year.

On the other hand
, Washington DC has the longest railway
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network
and serves the most
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people
among the three newer
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systems
. While the Kyoto and Los Angeles
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systems
were opened
in 1981 and 2001,
respectively
, and had a shorter route, with 45 kilometers in Kyoto and 50 kilometers in Los Angeles.
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IELTS academic The table below shows data about the underground railway networks, which compares the six networks in six cities based on their age, length and the number of individuals that use them annually.

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