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The map below show the information about the rabbit college 30 years ago and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map below show the information about the rabbit college 30 years ago and now. JLXna
The diagram demonstrate how Riverdal College has delivered since it was built. Overall, it has been drastic changes that happened with the facilities and establishment were already removed and improve in the size or number. 30 years ago a flower garden seeds to buy sports hall and Taras, as the former design the on the left-hand corner while the latter constructed on the right side. 3 storey building was at gents 22 the terrace which include refractory Kamal library and common room respectively full stop building on the east side was divided in the three portion where the ground area located to reception the other two were separate in 24 office roams. The entrance of reversal college was in the middle of office building and car park. Now it is noteworthy that this development have occurred with any noticeable damage to the sports hall near flower garden fortified with stairs. The building next to the terrace has been set up new floor which allotted to common room and Cafe took its previous place. Further, Four Offices have been shifted over the library. In addition to these, music room has been added in the basement of last building. The office floor split into classroom and at classroom car park was replaced with flower garden on the east side of entrance.
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Riverdal
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was built
.
Overall
, it has been drastic
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changes
that happened with the facilities and establishment were already removed and
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improve
in the size or number.

30 years ago a flower garden seeds to
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buy
sports hall and
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Taras
, as the former design the on the
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left
-hand corner while the latter constructed on the right side. 3
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storey
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building
was at gents 22 the terrace which include refractory Kamal library and common room
respectively
full
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stop
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building
on the east side
was divided
in the three portion where the ground area located to reception the other two were separate in 24
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office
roams. The entrance of reversal college was in the middle of
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office
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building
and car park.

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Now
it is noteworthy that this development have occurred with any noticeable damage to the sports hall near flower garden fortified with stairs. The
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building
next
to the terrace has
been set
up new floor which allotted to common room and
'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
Cafe
took its previous place.
Further
, Four
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Offices
have
been shifted
over the library.

In addition
to these, music room has been
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added
in the basement of last
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building
. The
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office
floor split into classroom and at classroom car park
was replaced
with flower garden on the east side of entrance.
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