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The provided table chart depicts the information about the percenta of human being who travelled by bus in the united kingdom from 2009 to 2011.The data has been calibroted in ratio.

The provided table chart depicts the information about the percenta of human being who travelled by bus in the united kingdom from 2009 to 2011. The data has been calibroted in ratio. bERnP
To commence with, In 2009 people went shopping by bus proportion respectively 65%. However, 19% human being visiting with friends by bus in 2010. During this year, persons doing the shopping by bus where percentage was 56%. Moreover, going people by bus on there work in 2009 ratio of 5%. In the same year using the bus for study proportion was 4 percent. furthermore, The day tour going people by bus in 2011 ratio was 12%. . In the similar year human being pecent was 23% of visiting with friends by bus. Since, In 2009 going people for study by bus proportion was 9 %. During this year persons day tour visiting city view by bus percenta was 7%. overall, it is clearly seen that the highest percentage people shopping by bus in 2009. Whcecas, the least in 2011 using the bus for work ratio was 0 percenta.
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, persons doing the shopping by bus where percentage was 56%.
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by bus on there work in 2009 ratio of 5%. In the same
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using the bus for study proportion was 4 percent.

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for study by bus proportion was 9 %. During this
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