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The Diagram of electricity producing by water flow

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The picture depicts the process through which water used to produce electricity. Overall, process consists of eight stages, start from water in high level reservoir, to culminating in electricity in national grid. At the begin, water is added in high level reservoir from the river, after which, gate of the dam is opened and water goes to low level reservoir, where water pass through the generator, at time water flow generate reversible turbine and produce electricity. Generated electricity goes to national grid by power lines which are connected with generator. In night time, functions works in reverse. Saved water in low level reservoir during day, pumped into high level reservoir. water pump use electricity which is produced during day by flow of water to take water into high level reservoir, due to more electricity can be produce during day. At night, gates of dam keep closed to pump out all water in high level reservoir from low level reservoir.
The picture depicts the process through which
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water
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used
to produce
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electricity
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Overall
, process consists of eight stages,
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start
from
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water
in
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high
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level
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reservoir
, to culminating in
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electricity
in national grid. At the
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begin
,
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water
is
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added
in
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high
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level
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reservoir
from the river, after which, gate of the dam
is opened
and
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water
goes to low
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level
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reservoir
, where
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water
pass through the generator, at time
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water
flow generate reversible turbine and produce
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electricity
. Generated
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electricity
goes to national grid by power lines which
are connected
with generator. In
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night time
, functions works in reverse. Saved
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water
in low
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level
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reservoir
during day, pumped into
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high
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level
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reservoir
.
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water
pump
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use
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electricity
which
is produced
during day by flow of
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water
to take
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water
into
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high
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level
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reservoir
, due to more
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electricity
can be produce during day. At night, gates of dam
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keep
closed to pump out all
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in
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