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The table below show the number of hours per week people of different ages spend using the internet for different types of activities.

The table below show the number of hours per week people of different ages spend using the internet for different types of activities. 8Q52k
The table displays how many hours per week people of various ages (teens, 20s, 30s, 40s, 50s, and older 60s) spend working/ studying and leisure activities on the Internet. Overall, the total time spends on working or studying is higher than that on leisure activities. Most ages spend more time working or studying except the teens and people in their 60s. In terms of working or studying, people in their 20s spend the most time on this, about 50 hours per week. The hours are also high for people in their 30s, 40s and 50s (45, 40, and 40 respectively). The people in their 60s or older just spend 17 hours on this term. However, the hours that the teens spend are the least hours spend in all ages, 15 hours per week. On the other hand, the time spend on leisure activities is lower than that of working or studying, which account for not higher than 20 hours a week. Teens spend the most time on this (20 hours), which is double that of people in their 40s and 50s, who just spend 10 - 11 hours. People of other ages spend 17-18 hours on this term.
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10 - 11
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