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the plans show the changes of particular area from 1965 to 2021 and plans also give proposed changes in 2025.

the plans show the changes of particular area from 1965 to 2021 and plans also give proposed changes in 2025. k5Ykn

The picture below depicts the layout of an area in a city in 1965 to 2021 and also show future plan 2025. Overall, it can be observed from the map that plethora of development has been seen in the area from past to present and some plans are made for future. Analyzing the layout of 1966 map, there was a tam river, which was passing from north to south, with a branch flowing from the west to east and bisects the area into two. On the right side of river, there were a few houses on the north-east corner, whereas the southeast area was totally undeveloped. City was situated towards the south of the river’s branch, while other side of branch towards north was covered by trees. Now noticeable changes have been seen in the present day. Car Park is now replaced on the places of area utilized by trees. Two foot bridges have been made, one is on the northern tributary and another one is on southern tributary which enables the individuals to move from car park and city to the ashore as well as houses. City is located at same place, but two car parks is proposed to make in future. One will be between the houses and second one will be on the south of the ashore.

The picture below depicts the layout of an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 in a city in 1965 to 2021 and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 future plan 2025.

Overall
, it can be observed
 from the map that plethora of development has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 from past to present and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 plans are made
 for future.

Analyzing the layout of 1966 map, there was a tam river, which was passing from north to south, with a branch flowing from the west to east and bisects the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 into two. On the right side of river, there were a few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 on the north-east corner, whereas the southeast You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 was totally
 undeveloped. City was situated
 towards the south of the river’s branch, while other side of branch towards north was covered
 by trees.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 noticeable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the present day. Car Park is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 replaced on the places of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 utilized by trees. Two foot bridges have been made
, one is on the northern tributary and another one is on southern tributary which enables the individuals to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 from car park and city to the ashore as well
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
. City is located
 at same place, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 two car parks is proposed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. One will be between the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and second one will be on the south of the ashore. 