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The charts below show the results of survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 year of each summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given table and pie chart reveal the information related to the results of a survey of the primary exercise objective and locations of a selected group of older between 20 to 15 years of age. Table provide information regarding main aim of exercise and data given in the percentage, highest number of adults do exercise for recreation which is a 40% and a quarter of older people's aim of exercise is a muscle toning. Moreover, mood improvement and for weight loss masses show almost similar ratio which is 10%. However, below 15% of aged people's aim of exercise to prevent from diseases. Pie chart reveal the data about where masses exercise majority of masses the like to do exercise in gym which is 35% and public supports the venue and playground and other public places show same number of amount that is 15%. Furthermore, one fourth people like to do exercise in the park. Overall, adults main aim of exercise is recreation and people prefer to do exercise in gym.
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table and pie chart reveal the information related to the results of a survey of the primary
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objective and locations of a selected group of older
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exercise
and data
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number of adults do
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exercise
for recreation which is a 40% and a quarter of older
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is a muscle toning.
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almost similar ratio which is 10%.
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from diseases. Pie chart reveal the data about where masses
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majority of
masses the like to do
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exercise
in gym which is 35% and public supports the venue and playground and other public places
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same number of amount
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15%.
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people
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in the park.
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is recreation and
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prefer to do
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in gym.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 year of each

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