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The line graph and table below given informative about water use worldwide and water consumption in Brazil and Democratic Republic of congo.

The line graph and table below given informative about water use worldwide and water consumption in Brazil and Democratic Republic of congo. W5ykk
The line graph and table illustrates the information about water use in global and it's utilized Brazil and Democratic Republic of congo in 2000 Overall, we can see that more water used by agriculture sector while in domestic section utilized less amount of water where, in Brazil water consumption per person was very high as compared to Democratic Republic of congo. According to the line graph, In 1900 farming sector water consumption was commenced with near about 500 km and after it climbed up approximately upto 3000 km whereas, in industrial and Domestic department were not started till 1920 but in both sectors water used with minor fluctuations till 1950. However, in industrial sector was increased near about 1000 km while in domestic sector increased just about 200 km. 176 million population in Brazil and they occupied 26500 km land, it's used 359 m water per person. Furthermore, in Democratic Republic of congo were stayed 5. 2 million population while irrigated land in 100km and 8 m water utilized per person.
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