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Percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions

Percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions nV67K

The line chart demonstrates number of travellers who want to go Edinburgh sightseeing attractions of Scotland. It compares four different entertainments places to compare: Aquarium, Castle, Zoo and Festival. Castle visitors coming was increasing from 25% to 45% during 1980 to 1995, reaching its highest level. Followed by 1995, the percentage rating significantly decreased to 30% end of 2010. Vacationers who enjoy festival activity maintain the same level between 25% to 30% throughout thirty years. 20% of aquarium sightseers started at the beginning of 1980 and continued its upward until 35% in 1985 and dramatically dropped less than 10% at the end of 2010. Holidaymakers visiting to Zoo rate went to an oscillation in the middle of 10% to 15% within two decades 1980 and 2000. After that there is an enormous climb till 20% end of 2010. By comparing those tourism attractions, castle tourists rose to a peak of 45% in 1995. On the contrary, Zoo visitor hit a trough point lesser 10% in 1990.

The line chart demonstrates number of Possible spelling mistake found.travelers
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 who want to go Edinburgh sightseeing attractions of Scotland. It compares four This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 entertainments places to compare: Aquarium,

Castle, Zoo and Festival.

Castle visitors coming was increasing from 25% to 45% during 1980 to 1995, reaching its highest level. Followed by 1995, the percentage rating significantly
 decreased to 30% This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2010.

Vacationers who enjoy festival activity maintain the same level between 25% to 30% throughout thirty years.

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started
 at the beginning of 1980 and continued its upward until 35% in 1985 and dramatically
 dropped less than 10% at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2010.

Holidaymakers visiting to Zoo rate went to an oscillation in the middle of 10% to 15% within two decades 1980 and 2000. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 that there is an enormous climb till 20% This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2010.

By comparing those tourism attractions, castle tourists rose to a peak of 45% in 1995. On the contrary
, Zoo visitor hit a trough point lesser 10% in 1990. 