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the table below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five part in 2006.

The given tabular charts depict information on how much potatoes were used and produced in five nation worldwide in the year 2006. To commence with, it can be seen that Europe was largest consumer of potatoes according to one person. After that, North America held 57. 9 kilogram per person. While, South and Central America accounted for 23. 6 kilogram per person in 2006. Next, Asian and Africa people ate approximately 25. 8 kilogram and 14. 1 kilogram respectively potatoes in five nation of the world. Moving ahead, Asia was noted the higher producer of potatoes apart from other nation. It was recorded 131. 2 million tonnes in 2006. However, 24. 7 million tonnes of potatoes were produced in North America but this production was five times more in Europe. South and Central America and Africa were marked up 15. 6 million and 16. 4 million tonnes respectively. Overall, it is clear that Asia and Europe were largest potatoes producing countries but people of Europe ate more potatoes as compared to other four nations.
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tabular charts depict information on how
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much
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potatoes
were
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used
and produced in five
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nation
worldwide in the year 2006.

To commence with, it can be
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seen
that Europe was
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largest
consumer of
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potatoes
according to one person. After that, North America held 57. 9
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kilogram
per person. While, South and Central America accounted for 23. 6
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kilogram
per person in 2006.
Next
, Asian and Africa
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people
ate approximately 25. 8 kilogram and 14. 1 kilogram
respectively
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potatoes
in five
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nation
of the world.

Moving ahead, Asia
was noted
the higher producer of
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potatoes
apart from other
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nation
. It
was recorded
131. 2
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million
tonnes in 2006.
However
, 24. 7
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million
tonnes of
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potatoes
were produced
in North America
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but
this production was five times more in Europe. South and Central America and Africa
were marked
up 15. 6
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million
and 16. 4
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million
tonnes
respectively
.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that Asia and Europe were
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largest
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potatoes
producing countries
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but
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people
of Europe ate more
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potatoes
as compared to other four
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nations
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IELTS academic the table below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five part in 2006.

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174 words
6.0
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