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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below depicts how electricity is produced using geothermal energy. Overall, There are five processes during the electricity production, starting with cold water that pumped down underground and ending with electricity transferred to the electric tower. First stage is cold water is pumped down 4. 5 km depth down to the underground into the injection well. Then cold water from injection wall is heated by hot rocks in the geothermal zone before going to the production well. Afterward hot water from the production wall goes up to the surface into the condenser, where the hot water will be turned into steam. Nextly, those steam from hot water creates power for the turbin to spin. Then spinning turbine that powered by the steam provides electricity which will be transferred to the civilians through the electric tower.
The diagram below depicts how
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electricity
is produced
using geothermal energy.
Overall
, There are five processes during the
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electricity
production, starting with
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cold
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water
that pumped down underground and ending with
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electricity
transferred to the electric tower.

First
stage is
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cold
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water
is pumped
down 4. 5 km depth down to the underground into the injection well. Then
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cold
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water
from injection wall
is heated
by hot rocks in the geothermal zone
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before
going to the production well. Afterward hot
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water
from the production wall goes up to the surface into the condenser, where the hot
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water
will
be turned
into steam.

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Nextly
, those steam from hot
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creates power for the
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turbin
to spin. Then spinning turbine that powered by the steam provides
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electricity
which will
be transferred
to the civilians through the electric tower.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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