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The table below illustrates how peole in difference age groups spend their spare time in Someland per year.

The table below illustrates how peole in difference age groups spend their spare time in Someland per year. BLV3V
The table below illustrates how peole in difference age groups spend their spare time in Someland per year. It is clear that watching TV is a popular activity that Somelander often do in their spare time. According to the figures, watching TV is a common activity of teenager or elder people in Someland. Both of them spend over a thousand hours per year to watching TV programs while this activity only ranges from 400 to 700 hours among others. Young people prefer to socialize with 4 or more people than fewer, they spend 300 hours for this activity. On the contrary, people in their thirties or older, they like socializing with more fewer people. Individual exercise attract more people in their 30s and 40s while group exercise is more popular in teenager. Older people like individual exercise than group sport. Watching cinema is not a common activity when teenager spends 100 hours on it. But people in 70s who spends more time in this activity.
The table below illustrates how
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peole
in difference age groups
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spend
their spare time in
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Someland
per year.

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clear
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activity
that
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Somelander
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often
do in their spare time.

According to the figures, watching TV is a common
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activity
of
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teenager
or elder
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people
in
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Someland
. Both of them
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spend
over a thousand
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hours
per year to watching TV programs while this
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activity
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only
ranges from 400 to 700
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hours
among others. Young
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people
prefer to socialize with 4 or more
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people
than fewer, they
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spend
300
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hours
for this
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activity
.
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,
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people
in their thirties or older, they like socializing with
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more fewer
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people
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Individual exercise attract more
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people
in their 30s and 40s while group exercise is more popular in
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teenager
. Older
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people
like individual exercise than group sport. Watching cinema is not a common
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activity
when
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teenager
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spends
100
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hours
on it.
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But
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people
in 70s who
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spends
more time in this
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activity
.
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IELTS academic The table below illustrates how peole in difference age groups spend their spare time in Someland per year.

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