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The pie chart depicts the information about the production of passenger cars in different countries in 2015.

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The pie chart depicts the information about the production of passenger cars in different countries in 2015. From the overview of the given data, it is vivid that, the maximum cars production was done in Great China followed by Europe and the least production took place in the Middle East and Africa. After having a keen observation of the given data, it is lucid that, the proportion of passengers cars in Great China as accounted for 26/ only and it was the highest production as compared to other countries. Moreover, the production of passengers cars in Europe was a quarter. The manufacturer of passengers cars in South Asia was 8/ and the passengers car production in Japan and Korea was doubled than that of in South Asia. Moving further, the production of passengers cars took place in North America was nearly a fifth. Furthermore, the passenger cars production in South American was 4/, moreover, the manufacturer of passengers cars in the Middle East and Africa was 2/ less than that of in South America.
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in Europe was a quarter. The manufacturer of
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in South Asia was 8/ and the
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in the Middle East and Africa was 2/ less than that of in South America.
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IELTS academic The pie chart depicts the information about the production of passenger cars in different countries in 2015.

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