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The table below gives information on education services in four african countries

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The table illustrates public education services in four african countries. To begin with, share of teachers without required knowledge level English and french 10% in kenya, while the highest in Senegal country. However, without required knowledge level is the lowest in Uganda. In addition, only 9 percent in Tanzania. Likewise, In mathematics 75% in Kenya and Senegal. In contrast, without maths knowledge 73% in tanzania whereas the least percent in Uganda public school. Similarly, classroom teacher absence rate was the highest in Uganda and the lower in Senegal. Subsequently, 53% teacher absence rate in Tanzania and Kenya has 47%. Meanwhile, daily classroom teaching time was more in Senegal and 2 hr 04 min teaching time was in Tanzania which was the less teaching time as compared to other countries. Consequently, Kenya and Tanzania 5 hr 40 min, 5hr 12 min respectively schedule teaching time. In contractry, schedule teaching time is more in the Uganada. Overall, public education data moderate in kenya while in Uganada done in the least activites.
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