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The two pie charts below show the proportions of Internet browsers in 2014 and 2050.

The two pie charts below show the proportions of Internet browsers in 2014 and 2050. KyJp3
The illustrated two pie charts provide the details of the proportions of Internet browsers in two different years, 2014 and 2050. They are the present and expected market shares of the browser in future respectively. Overall there are about ten various types of search engines, in which currently all of them take part either significantly or insignificantly. Whereas, the predicted market shares has come down to its one-third proportion. Throughout the years, Chrome remained to lead the share market. At present, in 2014, merely 10 internet browsers existed. Almost half the shares were by Chrome and the other half was in hands of Safari and Firefox with 30% together (Safari-16. 7% and Firefox- 13. 3). Other companies like Internet Explorer and Android Browser together owns 16%. The remaining are shared by all non-major parties at the moment. According to the estimated value, in the near future, the whole market is ruled by three companies, who had the maximum share in 2014. However Chrome is still in the lead with an increase of 30%, Safari has comparatively seen very little growth of 2%. On the contrary, Firefox has seen an negative growth of 6. 1%.
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of the proportions of Internet browsers in two
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years, 2014 and 2050. They are the present and
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market
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shares
of the browser in future
respectively
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all of them
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take part
either
significantly
or
insignificantly
.
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, the predicted market
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shares
has
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come
down to its one-third proportion. Throughout the years, Chrome remained to lead the
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share
market.

At present, in 2014,
merely
10 internet browsers existed. Almost half the
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shares
were by Chrome and the other half was in hands of Safari and Firefox with 30% together (Safari-16. 7% and Firefox- 13. 3). Other
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companies
like Internet Explorer and Android Browser together
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owns
16%. The remaining
are shared
by all non-major parties at the moment.

According to the estimated value, in the near future, the whole market
is ruled
by three
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companies
, who had the maximum
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share
in 2014.
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However
Chrome is
still
in the lead with an increase of 30%, Safari has
comparatively
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seen
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very
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growth of 2%.
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, Firefox has
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an
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negative
growth of 6. 1%.
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