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The line graph illustrates Caribbean Island is reached by the amount of visitors within the period 2010 to 2017.

The line graph illustrates Caribbean Island is reached by the amount of visitors within the period 2010 to 2017. nEoKK
The line graph illustrates Caribbean Island is reached by the amount of visitors within the period 2010 to 2017. To summarize, there is a rose in the quantity of tourists arriving on a Caribbean Island, no matter in the purpose of staying on island or staying on cruise ships. Despite there were some fluctuations in the number of visitors staying on island, the total number of visitors upsurged in the total figure of tourists visiting a Caribbean Island in the time phase 2010 to 2017. The total figures of all of staying in Caribbean Island were not obviously fluctuated by 2011. From 2012 to 2017, in the number of visitors staying on island climbs continuously by 1. 5 million by 2013, then remain steady from 2013 to 2015. Despite there is a slight download fall in 2014, it bounced back in 2015 by about 0. 5 billion. For visitors staying on ships, there is a sky-rocketing increase from 2012 to 2017 by about 1. 75 million. Regarding the total number of visitors, it first upsurge by 1. 75 from the period 2012 to 2015, then remained stable for a year and rose drastically in 2017 by 0, 75 million.
The line graph illustrates Caribbean
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Island
is reached
by the amount of
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visitors
within the period 2010 to 2017.

To summarize
, there is a rose in the quantity of tourists
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arriving on
a Caribbean
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Island
, no matter in the purpose of
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staying
on
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island
or
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staying
on cruise ships. Despite there were
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some
fluctuations in the
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
, the
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total
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number
of
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visitors
upsurged in the
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total
figure of tourists visiting a Caribbean
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Island
in the time phase 2010 to 2017.

The
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total
figures of all of
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staying
in Caribbean
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Island
were not
obviously
fluctuated by 2011. From 2012 to 2017, in the
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
climbs
continuously
by 1. 5 million by 2013, then remain steady from 2013 to 2015. Despite there is a slight download fall in 2014, it bounced back in 2015 by about 0. 5 billion. For
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visitors
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staying
on ships, there is a sky-rocketing increase from 2012 to 2017 by about 1. 75 million.

Regarding the
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total
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number
of
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visitors
, it
first
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upsurge
by 1. 75 from the period 2012 to 2015, then remained stable for a year and rose
drastically
in 2017 by 0, 75 million.
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