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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 7qb3
The table illustrates the proportion of expenditure spent in 5 countries (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey) on 3 types of consumer items in 2002. Overall, all the countries spent most on food/drinks/tobacco category which was 3 times higher than the other types of goods. And the lowest spending could be seen in the category of Leisure/Education. In terms of food/drinks/tobacco, Turkey spent the most at 32. 14%. The expenditure of Ireland was also high (28. 91%) compared to Sweden which spent at least (15. 77%). Spain and Italy spent 18. 80% and 16. 36% respectively. Whereas, Sweden only spent 15. 77%
The table illustrates the proportion of expenditure
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in 5 countries (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey) on 3 types of consumer items in 2002.

Overall
, all the countries
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most on food/drinks/tobacco category which was 3 times higher than the other types of
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goods
. And the lowest spending could be
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in the category of Leisure/Education.

In terms of food/drinks/tobacco, Turkey
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the most at 32. 14%. The expenditure of Ireland was
also
high (28. 91%) compared to Sweden which
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at least (15. 77%). Spain and Italy
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spent
18. 80% and 16. 36%
respectively
.
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, Sweden
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15. 77%

IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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