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The table below gives information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table represents movies released in UK and Ireland in the year 2012. Films are divided mainly with genre, number of release, percentage of all relaeses and percentage of income generated from sales of tickets. Overall, 45 percent of income is accomplished from comedy genre as local citizen got fascinated to this. Both Documentary and drama are released high in number through out the year although income from this genre is not stunning. Genre with Romance generated less amount followed by Thriller with percentage 0. 8 and 1. 3 respectively when compared with other genres. Only one Bio-pic has released all over the year. Horror collection is also strong. The percentage of releases was intense for both documentary and drama with 23. 6 percent each. Action, Crime, Thriller and romance have a awful income when compared with comedy and horror. Total 148 movies got published in the year 2012 which is magnificent for the movie makers.
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