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The bar chart illustrates a country's export earnings in different types between years 2015 and 2016, with a table represents the variance rates per export type from years 2015 to 2016.

The bar chart illustrates a country's export earnings in different types between years 2015 and 2016, with a table represents the variance rates per export type from years 2015 to 2016. YA2d
The bar chart illustrates a country's export earnings in different types between years 2015 and 2016, with a table represents the variance rates per export type from years 2015 to 2016. Overall, in both 2015 and 2016, the export earnings from petroleum products and engineered goods accounted for the most percentages, while as for the proportion change in values, textiles increased most. In terms of export earnings from 2015 to 2016, petroleum products contributed the largest scale, both years had more than 60 billion earnings. The following category was engineered goods, which had about 56 billion in 2015 and around 62 billion in 2016. Similarly, earnings from textiles were also more from 2016, which was nearly 32 billion, compared to approximately a quarter billion in 2015. However, in 2015, gems and jewellery made up higher earnings about 43 billion, which was around two million higher than that in 2016. Lastly, agricultural products, which the two years had similar earnings that were a little higher than 30 million. Turning to the rate change in values in both years, agricultural products increased the least amount, which was 0. 81%, following by petroleum products at 3%. After that, engineered goods increased 8. 5% in comparison. Then, textiles changed the largest percentage at 15. 24%. However, there was only the gems and jewellery that shows a downward trend at 5. 18 percent.
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types between years 2015 and 2016, with a table represents the variance rates per
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type from years 2015 to 2016.

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from petroleum
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accounted for the most percentages, while as for the proportion
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in values, textiles increased most.

In terms of
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from 2015 to 2016, petroleum
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contributed the largest scale, both years had more than 60
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was engineered
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goods
, which had about 56
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in 2015 and around 62
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in 2016.
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in 2015.
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made up higher
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about 43
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higher than 30 million.

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in values in both years, agricultural
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increased the least amount, which was 0. 81%, following by petroleum
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at 3%. After that, engineered
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increased 8. 5%
in comparison
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the largest percentage at 15. 24%.
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a downward trend at 5. 18 percent.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates a country's export earnings in different types between years 2015 and 2016, with a table represents the variance rates per export type from years 2015 to 2016.

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