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The given maps illustrate the information about the town of longley in 1910 and 1950

The given maps illustrate the information about the town of longley in 1910 and 1950 b7DX
The given maps illustrate the information about the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Overview, townhouses are converted into flats, but Jordan Street is still remained at same place the factory replaced by Thomas mansions houses In 1980, the town of Langley was Westside number of townhouses, alongwith the town houses was Jordan Street. In the north direction was factory next to the factory was wasteland. In the centre of the map was sherman Street and alongwith the street was a plethora of houses near the houses was store laundry and cafe. In south direction was wasteland and railway worker cottage, near the railway worker cottage was railway line. In 1950, many changes had taken in the city. All the house converted into flats and all the flats connected with the Jordan Street. Factory replaced by Sherman mansions after 40 years. Westeland was covered with sherman park and within the park was children play area. Laundry and cafe remain stable in the town railway line and railway worker cottage demolished and built new stores and new line.
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maps illustrate the information about the
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of Langley in 1910 and 1950.

Overview, townhouses
are converted
into flats,
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but
Jordan
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Street
is
still
remained at same place the
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factory
replaced by Thomas mansions
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houses


In 1980, the
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town
of Langley was Westside number of townhouses,
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alongwith
the
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town
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houses
was Jordan
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Street
. In the north direction was
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factory
next
to the
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factory
was wasteland. In the
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centre
of the map was
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sherman
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Street
and
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alongwith
the
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street
was a plethora of
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houses
near the
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houses
was store laundry and
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cafe
.
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In
south direction was wasteland and
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railway
worker cottage, near the
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railway
worker cottage was
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railway
line.

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In
1950,
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many
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changes
had taken in the city. All the
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house
converted into flats and all the flats connected with the Jordan
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Street
.
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Factory
replaced by Sherman mansions after 40 years.
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Westeland
was covered
with
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sherman
park and within the park was children play area. Laundry and
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cafe
remain stable in the
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town
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railway
line and
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railway
worker cottage demolished and built new stores and new line.
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IELTS academic The given maps illustrate the information about the town of longley in 1910 and 1950

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6.0
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