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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. xMJN
the given table indicates the information about the underground railway system in six cities overall, it is clear that first of all london establised underneath railways that covers a highest distence. although, tokyo government introduced underground railways with larger amout of passenger in the giver countries. whereas, los angeles was the latily comes into the buisness on the one hand london was the first in list with 1863 with the lenght of 394 km. however, paris was the second in this raw but with least lenght of the route which is only 199 km with the passenger per annam 1191 whereas london comes with 775 treveller yearly. on the other hand it can be observed clearly that los angeles and kyoto these establised underground railways in 2001 and 1981 with path lenght of 28km and 11 km. and few trevellers with 50 to 45. although, tokyo took the highest trevellers per year with 1927 million with the avarage lenght of 155 kms only.
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table indicates the information about the underground
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system in six cities

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london
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railways
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although
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tokyo
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introduced underground
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railways
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of passenger in the giver countries.
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whereas
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latily
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buisness


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lenght
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1191 whereas
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london
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with 775
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treveller
yearly.

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kyoto
these
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lenght
of
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trevellers
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

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