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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. geDO

The given table presents data on the six cities’ underground metro in terms of their opening date, kilometres of route and the number of travelers. Overall the oldest railroad is in London while Tokyo carries the most travelers. According to the table, London’s metro system reaches the furthest roads when the kilometres of route compared to the other cities. Meanwhile in Paris passengers can travel 199 kms via metro and 1191 million of travelers use metro in the city and in Tokyo it is 1927 million passengers while the length of ways can be gone with metro is 155 kms. Washington is the 4th most popular city in terms of traveling through underground railway, with 144 million of passengers and 126 kms. On the other hand Kyoto and Los Angeles have the newest metros comparing the others and they travel around only 11kms with 45 million passengers and 28 kms with 50 million passengers respectively. Surprisingly despite its late opening date, in Los Angeles more people use underground railway than Kyoto which started its metro system 20 years before.

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