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The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Kk0k
The map given illustrates the development of Ryemouth village from 1995 till present. Overall, it can be observed that the location and existence of the hotel, cafe, sea and highways remained unchanged through the years. However, the large farmland which was located north-east in 1995 was converted to a golf. The forest park which was by the farmland, right in front of the hotel in 1995, was converted. It is currently being used for tennis. The hotel, on the other hand, remained constant since 1995 but a car park was built by its right. Furthermore, the fish market which was situated in front of the sea in 1995, presently exists as apartments and the shop which was opposite the fish market, right across the road was converted to a restaurant. The fishing port was present in the sea in 1995 no longer exists. There is a marked increase in the number of houses presently, as sixteen houses can be identified compared to the twelve which existed in 1995. Also, a new road was constructed and is seen presently, located west, by housing. In contrast, the cafe remained unchanged. It is still situated opposite the hotel, right in front of the sea.
The map
given
illustrates the development of
Ryemouth
village from 1995 till present.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that the location and existence of the
hotel
,
cafe
,
sea
and highways remained unchanged through the years.

However
, the large farmland which
was located
north-east in 1995
was converted
to a golf. The forest park which was by the farmland, right in front of the
hotel
in 1995,
was converted
. It is
currently
being
used
for tennis. The
hotel
,
on the other hand
, remained constant since 1995
but
a car park
was built
by its right.

Furthermore
, the fish market which
was situated
in front of the
sea
in 1995,
presently
exists as apartments and the shop which was opposite the fish market, right across the road
was converted
to a restaurant. The fishing port was present in the
sea
in 1995 no longer exists. There is a marked increase in the number of
houses
presently
, as sixteen
houses
can
be identified
compared to the twelve which existed in 1995.
Also
, a new road
was constructed
and is
seen
presently
, located west, by housing.

In contrast
, the
cafe
remained unchanged. It is
still
situated opposite the
hotel
, right in front of the
sea
.
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IELTS academic The map shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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