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the chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in australia from 1980 to 2000

the chart gives information about the percentage of overweight men and women in australia from 1980 to 2000 qKRE

The bar chart given illustrates data about the proportion of people in Australia who were fat in 4 separate years 1980, 1990, 2000 and 2010. Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that the rate of overweight males was higher than females in each year. Meanwhile, the percentage of both overweight men and women increased gradually over the period shown. Another key feature is that the highest figure of the chart was recorded in overweight males. In 1980, the proportion of overweight males registered approximately 47%. This figure rose dramatically at just over 50% and to exactly 70% from 1990 to 2000 before this rate decreased minimally to around nearly 68% in 2010. In the first year examined, exactly 30% was the percentage of overweight women in Australia. This figure increased gradually stood at 40% in 1990 before this rate remaind unchanged to 50% by the last year studies.

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