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In some countries, people waste a lot of the food that they buy in shops and restaurants. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

In some countries, people waste a lot of the food that they buy in shops and restaurants. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem? ExLQ

The line graph illustrates changes in the number of people crowded in London’s subway only one day. Overall, it can be seen that, despite some fluctuations, over the period as a whole the levels of passengers crowded drop late night hours. If we check this graph, we come across 2 peak numbers at 8. am and 18. pm. Firstly, at the begging of the day passengers do not prefer to use underground vehicles till 7. 00. Afterward, we see that passengers amount decreased gradually over the following 4 hours after 18. 00. The main reason is that most of the people finished work before these hours and do not use the subway, they use other vehicles instead of the metro station. (it is a probability) On the other hand, if we check daily news about these numbers, we see that from 10. 00 to 14. 00(afternoon hours)most of the passengers prefer to use the subway. However, after this hours there was then a sharp fall to 18. 00.

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