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The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in 2 cities in May 2007.

The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in 2 cities in May 2007. GNKJB
the table compares information about temperatures and the time of sunrise and sunset in Mumbai and Moscow in may 2007. Overall, temperatures of Mumbai higher than Moscow but the time of the day in Moscow is longer than Mumbai. Turning to the details, the minium temperatures of Mumbai was steady 29 during three days of the week. Also, the hottest day was Sunday with 35 of maximum celsius degree. In the contrast, degree of Moscow was lower with a temperatures range to 3C from 10C. The warmest day in Moscow was Saturday with max 10 and min 3. The day in Mumbai started at 6am and finish around 4pm which about 10 hours in a day. The longest day was on sunday when sunrise at 6am and sunset at 4. 03pm. Opposite, the day in Moscow was much longer with 18 hours daylight from around 4. 54 am untill 10pm.
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of Mumbai higher than Moscow
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of Mumbai was steady 29 during three days of the week.
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range to 3C from 10C. The warmest day in Moscow was Saturday with max 10 and min 3. The day in Mumbai
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