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the table below gives information about the percentage of the internet users according to the age. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

the table below gives information about the percentage of the internet users according to the age. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. A33pn
The graph provides the data about the use of networking by various people in different ages from 1998 to 2000. Overall, users who belong to the group of 16-30 years utilized the internet more than any other groups while the minority of them who are under 16 used the net less than others. In 1998 the usage of the internet increased over 50 % among young people and it was nearly stable by 2000. Moreover, the net was widely used by adults who are in the age of 31 to 50 during 1998-2000 years. However, it was not so popular for users who are over 50 during 3 years and so it rose only for 6 %. In addition, using the net was not widespread in the group of people who are less than 15 years old in 1998, but, the ratio went up sharply in 2000 to 8 %.
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ages from 1998 to 2000.

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belong to the group of 16-30 years utilized the internet more than any other groups while the minority of them
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are under 16
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the net less than others.

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are in the age of 31 to 50 during 1998-2000 years.

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popular for users
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are over 50 during 3 years and
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IELTS academic the table below gives information about the percentage of the internet users according to the age. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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