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The table below gives information about six different countries underground railway system

The table below gives information about six different countries underground railway system 0AOwl
The table give information about Six various Countries underground railway System like, Paris, Tokyo, kxoto, Washington DC. Overall, London was established underground railwgts system in 1863 and the highest 775 million passangers are thausiled per year. And, Los Angeles was lowest in trangled in underground haillats Systems like onid So million passengers per year. First underslound railways system making by London in 1863 and make 394 kilometers of loute. And 725 millons of people traveled by train! Than. Paris was maked underground railways system in 1900 and 999 kilometers of route covered thus, 1191 million of masses traveled. It was the highest number of passenger traveled by underground hajthats ststem in Paris. Also, in Tokyo 1927 million passengers are tavene, by underground railwats system. In addition paris and Tokdo were huge amount of passenger traveled by underground tailwats. System. Furthermore V. k have longest railways ststem was established 1863.
The table give information about Six various
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Countries
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underground
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railway
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System
like, Paris, Tokyo,
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kxoto
, Washington DC.
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, London
was established
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underground
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railwgts
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system
in 1863 and the highest 775
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million
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passangers
are
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thausiled
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trangled
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haillats
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Systems
like
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onid
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million
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passengers
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First
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underslound
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railways
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system
making by London in 1863 and
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make
394 kilometers of
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loute
. And 725
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millons
of
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people
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traveled
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. Paris was
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maked
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railways
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system
in 1900 and 999 kilometers of route covered
thus
, 1191
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million
of masses
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traveled
. It was the highest number of
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passenger
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traveled
by
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underground
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hajthats
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ststem
in Paris.
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, in Tokyo 1927
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passengers
are
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tavene
, by
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railwats
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system
. In
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addition
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paris
and
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Tokdo
were huge amount of
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ststem
was established
1863.

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