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Contribution of sectors to the economy in the UK

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The bar graph provides information on the proportion of contribution of the different sectors such as agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services to the economy of UK from 1900-2000. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the data that the trend of agriculture and manufacturing were relatively similar (decreased significantly), however, there was some variance, especially during 1975 when the contribution of manufacturing was much higher that of agriculture, whereas business and financial services experienced a gradual increase in its contribution to the economy. Furthermore, the most significant difference among the three sectors was on agriculture. In details, in 1990, almost half (48%) of the contribution came from the agriculture industry, then it increased to more than 50%, the highest contribution among the sectors. By contrast, a sudden drop was experienced on 1975, accounting for only 10% and continued hitting off a point for more or less than 1% 25 years after. Similarly, the manufacturing sector continually decreased from 1990 to 2000 (about 45% to nearly 20%). On the contrary, the business and financial services sector, being the least sector contributing to the British economy on 1990, has been increasing dramatically over the period, from nearly 5% to considerably more than 30% by the end of the twentieth century.
The bar graph provides information on the proportion of
contribution
of the
different
sectors
such as
agriculture
,
manufacturing
and business and financial services to the economy of UK from 1900-2000.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
seen
from the data that the trend of
agriculture
and
manufacturing
were
relatively
similar (decreased
significantly
),
however
, there was
some
variance,
especially
during 1975 when the
contribution
of
manufacturing
was much higher that of
agriculture
, whereas business and financial services experienced a gradual increase in its
contribution
to the economy.
Furthermore
, the most significant difference among the three
sectors
was on agriculture.

In
details
, in 1990, almost half (48%) of the
contribution
came from the
agriculture
industry, then it increased to more than 50%, the highest
contribution
among the
sectors
. By contrast, a sudden drop
was experienced
on 1975, accounting for
only
10% and continued hitting off a point for more or less than 1% 25 years after.
Similarly
, the
manufacturing
sector
continually
decreased from 1990 to 2000 (about 45% to
nearly
20%).

On the contrary
, the business and financial services
sector
, being the least
sector
contributing to the British economy on 1990, has been increasing
dramatically
over the period, from
nearly
5% to
considerably
more than 30% by the
end
of the twentieth century.
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IELTS academic Contribution of sectors to the economy in the UK

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