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The table and pie chart depict the information related to population of Australia by

The table and pie chart depict the information related to population of Australia by LrpeV

The table and pie chart depict the information related to population of Australia by comparing distinct ethnicgroups and their locality. Overall, the major proportion of inhabitants comprised of Aussies and almost all Chinese resided in cities. Turning to the composition of different groups in Australia, nearly three-quarters of Australian and only 7% of British became citizen. Similarly, an insignificant fraction of Dutch, Chinese and New Zealanders, settled in Australia which was 1%, 2% and 3% respectively, whilst, people from other nationalities stood by 14%. Proceeding further, 89% British chose to live in cities followed by Dutch and Australian approximately 83% and 80%, respectively. The majority of Chinese and New Zealanders occupied towns from 90 to 99%. Meanwhile, around four-fifth of countryside dwellers were Australian as well as Dutch, whereas, the one-tenth fraction of rural area incorporated British and New Zealanders. Besides this, Only a negligible ratio of Chinese resided in village.

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