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The table below shows different statistics about six countries in 2017: GDP (gross domestic product), population, QoL (quality of life) index. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows different statistics about six countries in 2017: GDP (gross domestic product), population, QoL (quality of life) index. kW7xW
The given table manifests the citizens scenario, categorized into GDP, population and QoL, in six different countries in 2017. From an overall perspective, it is apparent that Asian countries were the most dominant in population. Notably, non-Asian countries had a substantially high quality of life index. As observed, Asian countries took lead in term of population, taking up approximately 3 billion residents combined. China was in lead in domestic product value at 12. 2 trillion USD, compared to Japan and India with 4. 9 and 2. 7 trillion USD, respectively. Although Japan had a considerable quality of life index, Asians had an adverse life compared to the others. The US were spectacularly booming in term of financial resources, with only 0. 3 trillion USD less than all Asian countries combined. Due to a significant gap in population, non-Asians had a far better life satisfaction index, with non being lower than 170.
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in 2017. From an
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were the most dominant in
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had a
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index.

As observed, Asian
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took lead in term of
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population
, taking up approximately 3 billion residents combined. China was in lead in domestic product value at 12. 2 trillion USD, compared to Japan and India with 4. 9 and 2. 7 trillion USD,
respectively
. Although Japan had a considerable quality of
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life
index, Asians had an adverse
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life
compared to the others.

The US were
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booming in term of financial resources, with
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0. 3 trillion USD less than all Asian
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combined. Due to a significant gap in
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population
, non-Asians had a far better
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life
satisfaction index, with non being lower than 170.
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IELTS academic The table below shows different statistics about six countries in 2017: GDP (gross domestic product), population, QoL (quality of life) index.

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