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The table and note given below give information about student enrollment at the Brighton Co ed Secondary School a privately run fee paying institute in 1990 2000 and 2010

The table and note given below give information about student enrollment at the Brighton Co ed Secondary School a privately run fee paying institute in 1990 2000 and 2010 85JGP
The table shows decade wise change in the student enrollments at Brighton Co-ed. The institute reached its full capacity and target in 2010. The school has seen an increase in the total number of enrollments from 800 to 3400 students from 1990 to 2010. Within this period there is a gradual decrease in the percentage of female students from 48 percentage points to 39 percentage points. On the other hand, there is an increase in number of male students which accounted for 61 percent of total students in 2010. The table also shows that there is a decrease of 20 percentage point in number of students residing within 5 miles of Brighton and Hove. The overall percentage of overseas increased by 20 percentage points from 5 percent in 1990 to 25 percent in 2010. During the period percentage of overseas students coming from rest of the world also increased to 24 percent of the total.
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enrollments at Brighton Co-ed. The institute reached its full capacity and target in 2010.

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an increase in the total number of enrollments from 800 to 3400
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from 1990 to 2010. Within this period there is a gradual decrease in the
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of female
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from 48
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to 39
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which accounted for 61
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in 2010. The table
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in number of
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of overseas increased by 20
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from 5
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in 1990 to 25
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in 2010. During the period
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of overseas
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IELTS academic The table and note given below give information about student enrollment at the Brighton Co ed Secondary School a privately run fee paying institute in 1990 2000 and 2010

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