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The table and bar charts show the high-speed uninterrupted internet connections of families in 5 nations between 2001 and 2002.

The table and bar charts show the high-speed uninterrupted internet connections of families in 5 nations between 2001 and 2002. Generally speaking, the USA and Britain had the highest proportion alter from 2001 to 2002. On the other hand, the connections per 1000 citizens of South Korea and the USA were more than the statistic for the other countries. In particular, the percentage change of Korea was 20% on the contrary the connections per 1000 people touched the highest poin in 2001. The USA had a significant percentage change of 170%. Moreover, the connections per 1000 residents in 2002 were 251. 1, which was the highest. The diagram reveals that the proportion variation of Britain was 230% compared to 80% of Germany and 120% of Switzerland. In contrast, the connections per 1000 heads of Switzerland in 2001 were higher than the statistics for Germany and Britain. It's interesting to note that enormous change of Britain made it the country having the bigger connections per 1000 people than the figures for Germany and Switzerland
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the high-speed uninterrupted internet
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of families in 5 nations between 2001 and 2002.
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speaking, the USA and Britain had the highest proportion alter from 2001 to 2002.
On the other hand
, the
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per 1000 citizens of South Korea and the USA were more than the statistic for the other countries.
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, the percentage
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of Korea was 20%
on the contrary
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per 1000
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touched the highest
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in 2001. The USA had a significant percentage
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of 170%.
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, the
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per 1000 residents in 2002 were 251. 1, which was the highest. The diagram reveals that the proportion variation of Britain was 230% compared to 80% of Germany and 120% of Switzerland.
In contrast
, the
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connections
per 1000 heads of Switzerland in 2001 were higher than the statistics for Germany and Britain. It's interesting to note that enormous
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of Britain made it the country having the bigger
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per 1000
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people
than the figures for Germany and
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Switzerland

IELTS academic The table and bar charts show the high-speed uninterrupted internet connections of families in 5 nations between 2001 and 2002.

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